Comments for A 1,000 Voices http://telmcg.wordpress.com Who knows but that, on the lower frequencies, I speak for you? -Ralph Ellison Wed, 23 Dec 2009 02:18:09 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Place by ‘Place’ by Telly McGaha [1/30] « 30in30 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/#comment-1213 ‘Place’ by Telly McGaha [1/30] « 30in30 Wed, 23 Dec 2009 02:18:09 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1816#comment-1213 [...] Originally Posted Here: http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/ [...] [...] Originally Posted Here: http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/ [...]

]]> Comment on Ruralburbia, in Three Tanka by Tel http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2008/12/24/ruralburbia-in-three-tanka/#comment-1212 Tel Mon, 21 Dec 2009 13:51:33 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=948#comment-1212 At the time, I, too, was trying to power up my tanka skills. I found a great online resource, but I cannot remember what it was at the moment. It provided a lot of direction, feedback from a group, and, of course, historical tanka. Can't wait to read yours! At the time, I, too, was trying to power up my tanka skills. I found a great online resource, but I cannot remember what it was at the moment. It provided a lot of direction, feedback from a group, and, of course, historical tanka. Can’t wait to read yours!

]]> Comment on Place by DumbBaby http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/#comment-1211 DumbBaby Mon, 21 Dec 2009 13:07:36 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1816#comment-1211 Beautifully abstract and still seeming so earnestly personal at the same time. Like the recollections of some wandering spirit.. but much less cliched than that obviously! Beautifully abstract and still seeming so earnestly personal at the same time. Like the recollections of some wandering spirit.. but much less cliched than that obviously!

]]> Comment on Ruralburbia, in Three Tanka by jessiecarty http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2008/12/24/ruralburbia-in-three-tanka/#comment-1210 jessiecarty Mon, 21 Dec 2009 02:59:57 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=948#comment-1210 i really love these! especially the first one. i love bringing the modern into a classic form. i really want to crank it up and work on tanka next week. wondering if there are any good how to tanka books out there? i have a haiku one... i really love these! especially the first one. i love bringing the modern into a classic form. i really want to crank it up and work on tanka next week.
wondering if there are any good how to tanka books out there? i have a haiku one…

]]> Comment on Place by Tel http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/#comment-1209 Tel Sun, 20 Dec 2009 01:10:57 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1816#comment-1209 Thanks, Rachel and Dhyan. They have certainly left a mark on me, though I doubt I've left very much of a mark on them. Perhaps through poetry some day? Thanks, Rachel and Dhyan. They have certainly left a mark on me, though I doubt I’ve left very much of a mark on them. Perhaps through poetry some day?

]]> Comment on Place by Rachel http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/#comment-1208 Rachel Sat, 19 Dec 2009 01:03:33 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1816#comment-1208 "Forgive me if I speak of them fondly as family, friends, and old dogs gone off to die" I love this! I like how you used the idea of places as creatures or objects. I know I'll carry the memories of my places forever, though I always wonder if I've ever made a mark on them. “Forgive me if I speak of them fondly
as family, friends, and old dogs gone
off to die”
I love this! I like how you used the idea of places as creatures or objects.
I know I’ll carry the memories of my places forever, though I always wonder if I’ve ever made a mark on them.

]]> Comment on Gutters by Dhyan (AKA Utopain Fragments) http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/gutters/#comment-1207 Dhyan (AKA Utopain Fragments) Thu, 17 Dec 2009 20:41:33 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1828#comment-1207 interesting. i mean, not what he would say.. but what i (would) say interesting.
i mean, not what he would say.. but what i (would) say

]]> Comment on Place by Dhyan (AKA Utopain Fragments) http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/place/#comment-1206 Dhyan (AKA Utopain Fragments) Thu, 17 Dec 2009 20:36:17 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1816#comment-1206 wonderful read.. "and old dogs gone off to die; it is precisely so. For their good and their bad, I am branded by memories. " and that singing bridge. i know one in Bern.. thanks for the memories wonderful read..
“and old dogs gone
off to die; it is precisely so. For their
good and their bad, I am branded
by memories. ”

and that singing bridge. i know one in Bern.. thanks for the memories

]]> Comment on Gutters by Tel http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/12/17/gutters/#comment-1205 Tel Thu, 17 Dec 2009 13:48:52 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1828#comment-1205 Yes, it's a throwback to William Carlos Williams, but I couldn't help it. While pumping gas one cold, rainy, night, I saw the gutter and wondered what he would've said about it. Yes, it’s a throwback to William Carlos Williams, but I couldn’t help it. While pumping gas one cold, rainy, night, I saw the gutter and wondered what he would’ve said about it.

]]> Comment on Some Strange Solstice by Tel http://telmcg.wordpress.com/2009/11/13/some-strange-solstice/#comment-1204 Tel Tue, 15 Dec 2009 13:03:21 +0000 http://telmcg.wordpress.com/?p=1708#comment-1204 Well, I did mean it metaphorically speaking, but maybe I should pick another disorder. I, too, am OCD, but that doesn’t really fit into this poem– unless it were about stalking or something. Well, I did mean it metaphorically speaking, but maybe I should pick another disorder. I, too, am OCD, but that doesn’t really fit into this poem– unless it were about stalking or something.

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